My modelling tutorial

ruby92 · Medic **Joined**: 08 Dec 2008 **Location**: Singapore FTW

NOTE : Karias is ruby, ruby is karias

i have a modelling tutorial, feel free to dl it. its for generals modders.
the linky is :
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?gojzmcyybyn
[Mirror at PPM]

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Roaches · Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:55 am Post subject:

Thank you, this will come in handy for me later. Smile

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Dutchygamer · Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:54 am Post subject:

Can't you just post it here. Not everyone wants to download a random .rar file Confused

Roaches · Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:30 am Post subject:

Its safe, It contains a max file, tutorial document, and a Example Render jpg file. Scanned it before opening it and nothing malicious detected.

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ruby92 · Medic **Joined**: 08 Dec 2008 **Location**: Singapore FTW

why would i put a virus in a fuckin tutorial? LOL

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OmegaBolt · Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 3:28 pm Post subject:

Ask the guys who do it.

ruby92 · Medic **Joined**: 08 Dec 2008 **Location**: Singapore FTW

i did it goddamit! >: (

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IcySon55 · Commander **Joined**: 19 Nov 2003 **Location**: Overworld

ruby92 wrote:

i have a modelling tutorial, feel free to dl it. its for generals modders.

This is the biggest train-wreck of a tutorial I've ever read. Here are few pointers on creating something, sane, decent, and actually helpful:

1. Word has a few features that were made to help you come across as intelligent. One of these, is known as spell check. The other, page break. Spamming up a tutorial with "yay enchilada spam" so that you can get to the next page is just moronic.

2. Assuming your reader has the IQ of a goldfish doesn't help make your tutorial any more readable. Use of makeshift grammar and assumed words can prevent readers from taking your tutorial seriously. Like this post suggests.

3. Talking about useless junk like your colour preferences or the requirement of having a mouse...is just wasting the readers time. Apologizing about the font size is just plain retarded and insults the readers' intelligence. Another one of Word's many features include Zoom.

4. Including a max file from 3D Studio Max 2009 is almost completely pointless considering very few people actually have 2009, and no older version of max can open a 2009 max file. That's a pretty BIG difference from 2008...

5. Including and then censoring profanity in a tutorial is just plain stupid. Profanity doesn't teach anyone anything.

6. Specifically calling out peoples names in a tutorial is just retarded. How does knowing who the tutorial was written for help the reader?

Cons:
Terrible English -5
Misuse of Word -2
Reader is a dumb-ass -3

Pros:
Images are OK +1 (It almost looked like you knew what you were doing.)

Overall Result: 1/10

Banshee · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:06 am Post subject:

Unfortunately your lack of constructive criticism also gets that score, Icy.

JJ_ · Light Infantry **Joined**: 12 Sep 2008

That is not constructive because...?

He didn't just go ahead and bash with random words, he pointed out what's wrong with it and what should be corrected. Sure it is negative, but it is not unconstructive at all.

ruby92 · Medic **Joined**: 08 Dec 2008 **Location**: Singapore FTW

okay anything, my nature is like tat, you can't change the fact that i like putting crap in everything, my models, my mod, my tutorial.I put crap in it to make then funny. its okay tat you point out stuff that are not constructive, it helps anyways. Very Happy

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